In [Year], [Founder/we] [noticed a problem, e.g. realized that every candidate's LinkedIn summary sounded the same]. [Describe the problem vividly — make the reader nod in recognition].
[The struggle — what existing solutions got wrong, e.g. Every tool on the market was either too generic or too expensive].
[The breakthrough — what changed, e.g. That's when we realized most people aren't bad writers — they just don't have the right frameworks].
So we built [Product] — [one sentence describing what it is and why it's different].
Today, [Product] [current traction or impact, e.g. serves 10,000+ professionals every month]. [Forward-looking vision, e.g. And we're just getting started].
Tips to strengthen your text
4/4✓Identifies a clear problem or villain
✓Includes a turning point or breakthrough
✓Shows the transformation or outcome
✓Has a human, emotional element